Poem-Dancing with Daffodils
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Poem-Dancing with Daffodils
Yellow and white daffodils open to the spring sun
Blue and purple pansies love to see daffodils opening their petals
Looking like sun rays searching from a heart of gold
Red tulips with white edges stand tall enjoying the warmth
Spreading their petals
Pansies sit around the bottom of their stalks
We all look so pretty
Showing off all their colors
Together tonight we can dance
Maybe other flowers will join us dancing
A gentle wind stirred the tulips to bob their heads
Tulips turned to look at the daffodils as they swayed in the breeze
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I am from the south and our daffodils are in bloom, have been almost a week now. I have a poem and many photos I am working on and there is a daffodil. My mother loved those and through her I see their beauty.
Beautiful words you have.
Truly beautiufl ;I love our patio in the spring/summer when it's alive with flowers /shrubs and all else that makes it so colourful.
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
Sueswan, your wonderful comments will keep me happy today, thank you.
Hi Joyce,
Beautiful poem filled with amazing imagery. Spring is around the corner. :-)
Voted up up and away!
always exploring, love your great comments. We have a Spring day here in the low 60's.
Happyboomernurse, thank you for your wonderful comments
Beautiful poem that captures the essence of spring and the photos are gorgeous!
Voted up and beautiful.
Rosemay50, I'm looking forward to seeing some color in my boring winter garden. Thank you for you votes, Joyce.
Frank my friend, your praise it so great thank you.
Lesley, I love to make you smile,thank you for your votes.
Yesterday I had a great surprise to see Cloverleaf back on h/p.
What a lovely poem to make you smile with the thoughts of spring.
Voting up, best wishes Lesley
even the simple pleasures of life you make or write it so wonderfully.. you are an amazing writer20 :)
A beautiful poem
It seems everyone is anticipating spring, such a beautiful time of year. Daffodils are always the first sign for me, so bright and beautiful. A lovely garden scene writer.
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"A gentle wind stirred the tulips to bob their heads
Tulips turned to look at the daffodils as they swayed in the breeze..."
This has me ready and waiting for the stirrings of spring. Very nice!!
Loved it Writer, makes me think of spring..Woopie.. Smiles..
Lots of color and imagery going on here. I was down south this past weekend...the buttercups are already in bloom...hopefully they will survive a late winter event in February or early March. Thanks much for sharing this with us. UP ad BEAUTIFUL. WB
Cloverleaf Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago
Hi writer20, I have to agree with Genna East - after reading your beautiful poem I'm all ready for spring! I love the personification if this poem "bob their heads" and "turned to look". Very clever! Voting up :)