Poem- A Lonely Lady
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Poem-A lonely Lady
Her husband had passed so suddenly
She didn’t have time to say she still loved him or goodbye
At night she cried herself to sleep
No one to cuddle with or kiss goodnight
Left her feeling so lonely
Her deep sighs made her think
About her missing love
She noticed a little bird right outside her window
Tapping on the glass singing his cheery song and cheeping
As though to say I’m here to tell how much I love you.
You don’t have to be lonely I’m here to cheer you
In an instant she felt her heart whole again
The little bird stayed close by for the next week
Making sure she stayed happier
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wetnosedogs, he looks a cutey. Your the first to read this one and thank you for good comments.
Hi Writer20, Very well written and heartfelt. I have thought about how my better half would react if I was gone without warning. We do let each other know every chance we get how much we mean to each other just in case. Thanks for making other people think about how something can change your life in the blink of an eye. Greg
Hmmmmm.....
Capedium, I agree. But I have no idea why this poem came to me.
Up and beautiful Writer20. Wow, this was deep. I put myself in those shoes and think what it would feel like for me. I touches so many levels. As a lyricist, I do this a lot to write songs. Same as poetry as you probably already know. But when you can connect on that level, it stands out like this. Great work.
There is always some part of us that wants something more .. Some part of us that feels alone and left out sometimes. And sometimes, the world feels too big for me.. When am all by myself. I guess that's loneliness
Lots of feelings. I'm sorry for your lost. Very well written.
Kay
Ohhhh how lovely this is. I feel a tear forming. What a dear little bird, obviously, your love coming to remind you that he is close by. I am so very sorry for your loss. Your gift for writing such a beautiful poem is made even stronger through the release of your emotions. This deserves a tender vote UP.
vocalcoach, sorry this is not my story, it just came to who knows why.
KDee411, This is untrue poem, it just came to my mind.
thelyricwriter, you are welcome to use this poem if it helps you and thank you for your votes, Joyce.
Yet again, truly amazing!
Thank you for sharing the words and sentiments with us :)
Hi Joyce
Very beautiful and comforting. The little bird was a messenger from God sent to let the lonely lady know that her husband would never truly leave her and always be watching over her.
Voted up and away!
I wish you a good day my friend.
Take Care
Been there, done that.
Have a great day! Write on.
dadibobs, Thank you for your wonderful comments.
suseswan, I did put a picture of small on but for some it didn't come through. Thank you all your vote I appreciate them.
I wonder if you have noticed most of new hubbers don't vote?
anndavis25, sorry to hear that. You enjoy your day as well, Joyce
Bless that little bird..Sweet story..Thank you..
always exploring, Thank you for reading this poem.
I love how this sweet bird represents many things; not the least of which is the fragility of nature and of love, and how we are all connected in some way. Such a lovely poem!
Hello Joyce, this is so very lovely - I could relate to your words.
Beautiful and voted up.
Just lovely Writer, I relate to this one so much. I think grief can make one so much more aware of our connection with nature and the signs that present themselves, and as Genna said "we are all connected in some way". That little bird was a little ray of hope at a time of great despair. Beautiful and useful votes from me.
Hey writer20 I love this type of poetry.. is the bird perhaps holding her husband's spirit? I dunno.. just thought I'd take a guess ..)
Lovely, sentimental poem. Thanks for the wonderful share. Voted up! : )
Genna East, Thank you for your comments on this poem.
Hi Lesley, I hope I didn't make you feel sad reading this
one.
Fennelseed, I'm sure most followers can relate to this poem unfortunely, which does include me. Your wonderful comments are great and thank you for your votes.
Frank, your guessed is right. I'm glad you liked it, Joyce.
Girltalkshop, Great news you liked this one and thanks for your votes.
So very beautiful and has to be awarded my up up and away.
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
Eddy, thank you for your great comments on this poem, Joyce.
Excellent poem my dear Friend. Keep up your good work.
Best Wishes, Kamalesh
Strange how many little things do happen like that for people who need it. Great poetry.
Kamalesh, Your great comments are good news for me, your friend Joyce.
Jackie Lynnley, Life is peculiar sometimes.
...such beauty and tenderness written here and will be proudly displayed on my homepage at Facebook for all to see and read - I am also inviting you to join my new group at Facebook called LET'S JUST TALK MUSIC OR CINEMA - and I would love to have you join and participate as you will already know some of the people there - we're having a lot of fun so far - and my name is Colin Stewart with the same profile picture and the group link is on my homepage - sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time 5:31pm with afternoon tea
Hi Colin, I'll take a look thanks for the invite and your great comments for this poem, Joyce.
Hi Colin, I've been on to your F/B page with your name but there isn't a picutre of you and your cat and I didn't see the group link. Joyce
Aww. Animal indeed a sweet joy and gift from God for lonely heart. You captured it well.
Thank you for this sweet reading
Best wishes
Freya
Joyce, I found Colin's FB itsnow linked with mine under "Kay Dayton " im standing at a bar with a big red flower behind me,. If you can't find Colin go to mine and link up. I'de love to have you asmy friend too.
Kay
Freya Cesear, You sweet commets are great. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem, Best wishes Joyce
Kay, I did find Colin on fb but my cumputer is slow. I kept so many e-mails from Colin and all his members so today I cancalled my membership.
We can be friends on Hb if you would like my e-mail let me know. Joyce.
I hit many buttons because this poem touched my heart. So beautiful writer :-)I liked the picture to go with the touching story.
Minnetonka Twin, I'm happy you liked this poem and thank you for all your votes.
I'll be on you page soon to click follow. I look forward to reading your hard work, Joyce.
Well done Joyce--such a sad place to be--
AudreyHowitt, I so hope both of us escape this situation.
You are off and writing. It would be impossible for anyone to write you off! Up and awesome.
Perspycacious, thank you for your comments and votes,Joyce.
This was fantastic, I love that bird, and her too.
Thank you
Voted way up!
Joyce I love this very much.. It reminds me of a short story i wrote a couple of months ago. wonderful poem
Debbie
Debbie, I happy you love this poem. Maybe I didn't read on h/p.
wetnosedogs 3 months ago
Aw, Beautiful, beautiful. Thank God for that sweet bird.